I used a lesson plan created for a Grade 7 ELA class and made some adjustments.

All my comments on the Document is titled:

• "Lesson Plan Review - Technology Improvements" and

• "Lesson Plan Modifications - Virtual Reality Lesson"

The reason for the titles is to ensure no confusion as to their purpose.

My additions to the lesson plan for the modification part is in red and underlined. I did not delete anything from the original to keep the document as clean and confusion free as possible. 

For the Alternative Learning Environments part I added suggestions on the last page of the document. It is also in red. My suggestions are based on the original lesson plan.